why you write
your privileged fear of sharks
-and the history
only reminds me of myself
turned to bitter delight
still
there are many ways
to starve
-and the history
only reminds me of myself
turned to bitter delight
still
there are many ways
to starve
posted by Ray G at 1:42 AM
6 Comments:
OHHH nice
my blog are in catalan but you can traduce it!!
thanks
http://poble9encatala.blogspot.com/
i like the deliberate oxymorons (if that's the right word) here, 'privileged fear' and 'bitter delight'. & the contrast between the complexity of the first stanza & the simplicity of the second.
And the mystery of who 'you' is... forces one to think about what is being said
there y go, another comment longer than the poem!
You're style is quite unique. I love how the poem is short yet so straight to the bull's eye. It's so striking that you just have to read it more than once.
Good Job!
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